Leavin On His Mind

Story ID:	995
Written by:	K. L. Farnum (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Story
Location:	Vine Grove U. S. A.
Year:	2006
Person:	Everyone

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Posted 10/06/2006 20:50 | Reply

Karan,
I liked this story very much. I could just picture the sadness and then at the end the joy.

Posted 10/06/2006 21:01 | Reply

wonderful I loved it. I hope to see more like this.

Posted 10/09/2006 22:27 | Reply

Wow, I am so glad he decided to stay. I love a happy ending.

Posted 12/19/2006 21:29 by Susan Hammett Poole | Reply

Oh, what a relief...he did not go! I like the way you put these lines together and succintly made the statement that the Leavin' part was just in his mind...he couldn't physically leave! Whew!

Posted 12/19/2006 21:33 by Susan Hammett Poole | Reply

Oops, succinctly, I should have spelled it correctly. K.L., you made me happy the way you ended this poem happily.