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LOST AT THE FAIR

Story ID:761
Written by:Wanda Molsberry Bates (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:Story
Location:Lincoln Nebraska USA
Year:1953
Person:Wanda Bates
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Posted 08/15/2006 06:45 by Carol J Garriott | Reply
I feel I've been to the Fair! Delightfully descriptive of sights and sounds. Another treasure. Carol
Posted 08/15/2006 17:00 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply
Typical of both kids, don't you think. I wandered in and out of pavillions right along with you savoring every hopeful blue ribbon, for you see, I was Chm. of our Co. Fair for 10 wonderful years. Your descriptions raised high senses of smells and tastes, for nobody, absolutely nobody grows flora or cans like the fair ladies. Loved it to pieces, Wanda.......Kath
Posted 08/15/2006 17:48 by barbara elliott carpenter | Reply
What a sweet story, Wanda. I especially liked the last line, and the "me first" mentality of most siblings. Good writing. B. Carpenter
Posted 08/16/2006 00:19 by CP Campbell | Reply
YEP! YEP! Agreeing with the other 3 comments, and what a wonderful picture of just plain CHILDREN, along with the fair ; )
GOD BLESS!
Cher