THE CHARMS OF A SCHOOL GIRL

Story ID:	2803
Written by:	Frederick William Wickert (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Fiction
Location:	Stamford New York USA
Year:	2005
Person:	Melissa Fraser

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Posted 09/08/2007 07:15 | Reply

I loved the story Fred.
I especially enjoyed how descriptive everything was.
Being the visual person I am I nearly had to get up and get a sweater to stay warm. Melissa being so rain soaked made me shiver.
You are an incredible writer and I do not always get to comment on a story, but always read every one as soon as you post. You are an inspiration. Lorry

Posted 09/08/2007 09:37 by Frederick William Wickert | Reply

Thankyou so much for the compliments. Any more like that and my hat won't fit any more.
Fred

Posted 09/08/2007 11:13 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply

Well I'll be darned. Fiction hu? Being a baseball fan, I could feel it all, right down to my catcher's mitt. Nice job, Fred.....Kathe

Posted 09/09/2007 15:57 by Gail Lee Martin | Reply

Fred, this is a wonderful story with a surprise ending. Wish I had been at the tournament! Great last game. Gail

Posted 09/09/2007 21:32 by Veronica Breen Hogle | Reply

This story had a grabbing beginning. Your description of Melissa and her conflicts made her an interesting and compelling character. She engaged the reader from beginning to end. The dialogue kept the story lively. Fred, you have a natural way of writing a good story. Veronica Breen Hogle

Posted 09/09/2007 22:51 by Frederick William Wickert | Reply

Thankyou so much for the compliments. Like Lorry, you too want to expand my hat size.
Fred

Posted 09/11/2007 22:15 by Kathleene S Baker | Reply

Great story, Fred! And such a nice, happy ending to boot. Well done.

Kathy Baker

Posted 09/20/2007 19:46 | Reply

Fred, that was one of your best works you have done. It was so real, and so good. What else can I say.

Barbara