The Fall

Story ID:	2775
Written by:	Zofia Danute Barisas (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Poem
Location:	Ajijic Jalisco Mx Mexico
Year:	2007

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Posted 09/02/2007 21:41 by Nancy J. Kopp | Reply

A lovely narrative, even if it does deal with an unpleasant event in your life. Glad to hear your injury was no worse. A nice message in your conclusion. I always enjoy your postings.
Nancy

Posted 09/03/2007 13:08 by James Tipton | Reply

Another nice poem by Zofia! I particularly liked the next-to-the-last stanza and initally thought the poem should end there. Perhaps she should drop the final stanza and retitle the poem "The Kindness of Friends."

Posted 09/05/2007 09:33 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply

Another nice narrative. I know little about poetry, either that I like them or I don't. I liked this one.......Kathe

Posted 11/13/2007 23:27 by Mike Mercer | Reply

Oh yes tis very good.