That's It!

Story ID:	211
Written by:	Edie Suarez (bio, link, contact, other stories)
Organization:	Basics2Bylines - A WNY Writers' Network
Story type:	Photograph
Location:	Hershey PA USA
Year:	2005
Person:	Vacationer

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Posted 03/28/2006 09:40 by barbara elliott carpenter | Reply

Hi Edie,

You are braver than I am. I went with my daughter, my granddaughter and two of her friends back east last spring. We toured the Hershey Plant, etc; but it was rainy, and we didn't go to the park. However, if we had, there's no way I would have put my body in that high thing! Your poem caught the essence of it.....

Barbara Elliott Carpenter
www.barbarelliottcarpenter.com

Posted 05/26/2007 21:22 | Reply

This is precisely how I feel if I ride anything at a carnival park other than the carousel.
You expressed the feelings and thoughts of many of us in this poem, Edie.
Blessings,
Sandi in FL.