Will Jamison and the Black Swan Mine Chapter 2 Laughter, Songs, and Silence

Story ID:	1779
Written by:	Nancy J. Kopp (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Fiction
Location:	Medlin Iowa USA
Year:	1895
Person:	Will Jamison

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Posted 03/07/2007 15:03 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply

Ooh No! I sure hope Will is mistaken about his grandmother. And what's up with that spooky character who skulks about the neighborhood? Eeew!!! I sure like the trio of friends and am so glad you included the girl, Emily. Well, Nancy, you've done a fine job setting us up, can hardly wait for Chapter 3.

Posted 03/07/2007 16:08 | Reply

This is another interesting chapter in your book. Your descriptions of the characters bring them to life and make us want to read more of their stories.
Wanda M.B.

Posted 03/08/2007 16:25 by Kathleene S Baker | Reply

Ok, get to writing! You've got my curiosity stirred up - what a grumpy grandmother. I know already I don't like her.

Great job, Nancy.

Posted 03/08/2007 19:50 by Betty (BJ) Roan | Reply

Great visuals. Poor Will. I sure hope his grandma lets him know she is proud of him. I’m eagerly anticipating the next installment. BJ

Posted 03/09/2007 13:35 | Reply

This is a set-up for an intriguing tale, Nancy. I like the foreshadowing, and anticipate lots of conflict ahead. Sure to be a hit!
Maria