Will Jamison and The Black Swan Mine Chapter 1 A Fight In The Schoolyard

Story ID:	1750
Written by:	Nancy J. Kopp (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Fiction
Location:	Medlin Iowa USA
Year:	1895
Person:	Will Jamison

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Posted 02/28/2007 15:33 by Maria Harden | Reply

Nancy, I remember reading this story when you first started on it. I can see improvements; I like the conflict, and I can already see where you're going with the plot. I look forward to each weekly chapter, and I wish you success in getting it published some day.
With admiration,
Maria

Posted 02/28/2007 16:53 by Renie Burghardt | Reply

Oh, I like Chapter I, Nancy. Great dialog and action keeps the story moving and interesting! I'm looking forward to Chapter II.

Renie

Posted 02/28/2007 17:27 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply

Great powerful beginning, Nancy. I can only guess where the story will lead us with such a title. Best wishes for getting your work published. You deserve it and more....Kath

Posted 02/28/2007 21:44 by Betty (BJ) Roan | Reply

I’m hooked. Hooligan is a word we rarely hear these days. My maternal grandpa was fond of using it when referring to his rough-housing grandsons. Whether the character names are real or fictional, each is perfect, evoking a mental picture without the need for detailed description. I’ll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter. BJ