The Long White Line and Those Smiling Faces

Story ID:	1532
Written by:	K. L. Farnum (bio, contact, other stories)
Story type:	Family Memories
Writers Conference:	$500 2007 Family Memories Writing Project
Location:	Hawaii U. S. A.
Year:	1966
Person:	Another Time

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Posted 01/19/2007 09:49 by Nancy J. Kopp | Reply

This one brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye. Well done!

Posted 01/20/2007 22:39 by K. L. Farnum | Reply

Thank you so very much.

Posted 01/19/2007 17:31 by Kathe M. Campbell | Reply

And you're worried about getting it all together? A few little edits to fix here and there, but you made me feel it, KL. I advise that you write, let your piece rest for a few days, go back and edit for smoothness, for you've got the hang kiddo. I loved this one........Kath

Posted 01/19/2007 23:01 by K. L. Farnum | Reply

Thank-you so very much, I am afraid sometimes my head gets ahead of the fingers, I'm afraid English was not my cup of tea in school. So any help is greatly appreciated.

Posted 01/20/2007 10:52 by Dick Dunlap | Reply

WOW! So well crafted. Each sentence exuded emotion. Well done.

Posted 01/20/2007 22:37 by K. L. Farnum | Reply

Thanks a bunch, I appreciste that vote of confidence.